Monday, March 16, 2015
Winter Break
This passed winter break was very fun and exciting for me, I had amazing experiences. winter break was 3 weeks long. one of the most memorable experience's was spending lots of time with my family for the holidays. My family flew in from Mexico to spend the holidays together. I spent my Christmas at my uncles house were all my family gathered together to spend it . New years was similar we spent it at my house all my family came over the food was delicious I loved it . Another memorable event was going to six flags with my cousins. I enjoyed going on the roller coasters the only bad thing was it was too cold to be waiting in line so we left the park earlier than usual. Another experience was going to San Pedro port where they make the best sea food .one of my favorite foods their is the shrimp cocktail. The only bad thing was that the weather was terrible it was really cloudy and started raining which caused us to leave. This winter break is one I will remember for years to come because all of the great family times I had.
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over all its good. some grammar errors but its good.
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you had a lot of fun. This is a great essay.
ReplyDeleteYour general writing was good however you can improve your organization.
ReplyDeleteGlad that you had a fun winter break~ and your details on them
ReplyDeleteGlad that you had a fun winter break~ and your details on them
ReplyDeletegood job! I really liked your essay
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